Monday, February 7, 2011

"The Mouse That Had a Very Long Tail"

I was looking through some of my old journals today, but I didn't get very far, because... I stumbled upon a story that I wrote when I was 7!  I decided that it needed to be posted, spelling errors included (It wouldn't be the same without them!).  I actually remember writing it, and I remember thinking that I was going to be a famous 7 year old author... hmm...

I now present to you,

"The Mouse That Had a Very Long Tail"
                                                                      by, me... 13 years ago.

"Once upon a time ther was a mouse with a very long tail.  All off the other mice made fun off him because he was diffrent.  One day when he was takeing a walk his friend accidently stept on his tail and everybody started to laugh but he diddn't care.  He just kept on walking and agnored them.  He dieccided to go into the big city.  There was plenty of food to eat there.  He saw a huge blanket that was rolled up.  He diessided to tip it over and unrool it to sleep in for the night.  When he got up in the morning he diessided to take a bath but there was a big hole in the bathtub.  So he diessided to put a big orang ball on the big hole in the bathtup.  Then he diessided to go down the big hole.  It took him to a nother bathtub.  He went flying onto the ground.  He notisd that he landed on a soft thing that was a rectangle.  Then a big giant came in and sat down on the bathtub.  He ran behind the bathtub and hid.  Then the big giant hit a long stick and all the water went down and it made a loud noise.  When the big giant was gone he diessided to clime up on the bathtub and then jump as high as he could and pole the long stick down with his tail and all the water went down and it made a loud noise.  He was luckey that the big giants didn't hear him.  Then the same giant came back and poled a long switch down and it got darke.  When the big giant was gone he jumd up and swung his tail a round and poled the long switch up and it got bright and then he poled it back down and it got dark again.  It was just like the one he had in his house but bigger.  Then he diessided to leav that room.  Then he saw a dish with lots of food in it.  He ate every single crom in it.  He was very fole after he finished eating it.  Then he dissieded to leave that room.  Then he saw more food but he diddn't want to eat it.  So he put a small green ball on a skinny thing with a circle on the end and jumed on one side of it and the small green ball went flying.  Then he diessided to leav that room.  Then he saw a big giant sitting on a big thing reeding a big huge black and white pees of papper with huge writting on it.  Then the mouse saw a huge stick on the thing but it was bigger than the one on the bathtub.  So he jumped up and pulled the stick down with his tail.  It made the back of the thing that that giant was sitting on go up.  The giant jumped up in fright.  The mouse hid behind the thing that the giant was sitting on.  When he came back in the front of the thing the giant was gone.  Then he saw a giant reading a theng that had a lot of pages.  He fliped one page and the giant ran out the room screamming.  He wondered why she was so scared.  He didn't mean to frightin her.  Then he had a good thaught.  He used his tail for making the water go down the bathtub, making the room get light and dark and making the thing the giant was sitting on go up and down.  He went out side to tell his friends.  But nobody belived him so he told them to follow him.  First he showed them the switch that looked like the one he had at his house.  He jumped up swung onto it with his tail pulled it down and every boddy cheered.  He did the escact same thing with the other stuff and every buddy wished they had a verry long tail, and they were all best frientds.
                                The End

Hopefully you were able to find out what all of the objects were... because I'm not telling! Okay, except for the fact that the rolled up blanket was a roll of paper towls.  That one was a little tricky...

3 comments:

  1. I love the typing errors of a 7 year old! Very great story Michelle. You should have it published!

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  2. I couldn't stop thinking about how difficult this would be to type!

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  3. Haha. "Diessided" was killing me! Although, I'm a huge fan of "every buddy."

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